Oh I so love you. Love you, love you, love you. Your characterization is so good I want to kidnap it and keep it and feed it cookies, but then you might not write anymore, and I would be stuck forever with the sad face that looks like this :(. Only with more tears.
I can't pick one or five favorite bits; you show your usual flair for laughing-till-it-hurts one-liners. Zack's drama and Seph's ignorance of human things are stand-outs, though. Hell, I love the whole damn thing. *offers ninja-shaped chocolatey cookies*
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Date: 2009-01-26 08:28 pm (UTC)From:I can't pick one or five favorite bits; you show your usual flair for laughing-till-it-hurts one-liners. Zack's drama and Seph's ignorance of human things are stand-outs, though. Hell, I love the whole damn thing. *offers ninja-shaped chocolatey cookies*