I loved this. It takes what I've always thought Cloud felt about his relationship with Tifa--and why a sexual relationship wouldn't work--and makes it literal, and it works. Brava~!
Especially those last few lines of dialogue. XD
One quick typo, I think: “I’ve been trying to work out the timing,” she said, licking her Whatever happened, it was just before my parents got married, wasn’t it?”
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Date: 2011-04-01 01:28 am (UTC)From:Especially those last few lines of dialogue. XD
One quick typo, I think: “I’ve been trying to work out the timing,” she said, licking her Whatever happened, it was just before my parents got married, wasn’t it?”
But otherwise, it read very well.