ardwynna: (kadaj serious)
Title: The Crossing
Characters: Zack, Cloud.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 980
Warning: Mild shounen-ai if you want to squint at it that way.
A.N.: Nothing but nothing gets done on Ash Wednesday apparently, so I wrote this instead of sitting down bored.



There were good days and bad days and today was not exactly going all that well. Zack hoisted Cloud up on his back and took another careful step into the water. “Hang on tight, Spike,” he said, tightening his hold on the boy’s knees. Just to be safe, he bent down a bit more, shifting his balance so Cloud would rest on him instead of sliding off. “We’ll be out of this rain in no time.”

Cloud’s arms slipped loose from around Zack’s neck. Zack made a lurching grab and managed to grip one limp wrist to his chest. The other arm dangled near his hip. Zack froze midstream and tossed a grin back over his shoulder. “Oh, you want to swim, do you? You are one gutsy guy, Cloud, I’ll give you that.” He shifted to settle Cloud properly into place before taking one careful, shuffling step.

“Now most people, swimming in a river is a big enough thrill,” he said, “but a flooded one? In the middle of a rainstorm? You are one brave nut.” Zack shook the water out of his hair but the rain was still pouring so it didn’t make much difference. Water kept streaming off Cloud’s spikes and down Zack’s neck and that was not helping anything.

“Well,” Zack choked out, looking around, “it’s been a while since we stopped for a proper bath anyway, right? Guess I must have been reeking so…” He lifted one sodden boot up from the riverbed, trying to tug his bootlaces free from the shifting debris. “So I can’t blame you for wanting to make me wash. Whoa!” He straightened up to let a large branch float by. “Shiva, Cloud, you’re a braver man than me.”

He bent over again, his face almost in the murky water. Cloud’s legs dangled down so Zack could get a better grip. He looked back and caught a glimpse of Cloud’s blank face and the black skies above. “Cloud, you and me are going to have to talk about this primping, preening side that you’ve been hiding. I mean, signing me up for a mud bath?” Zack heaved and took another step into the silted water. He couldn’t see his feet for all the mud the current was churning up.

His next step was shaky and he stood wavering on one leg as the current tried its best to carry him off. “Cloud, you little thrill junkie, let’s say next time we do this, we use a raft, ‘kay?” One foot before the other, Zack walked, fighting the stream. It was nothing for a SOLDIER, really. Heck, Cloud was handling it just fine so it was no trouble at all for Zack.

One more step and his belt rose above the water level. Two more and he was struck by just how soggy his drawers were. Three more and his baggy uniform pants were sticking too close to his skin. He lost count how many more steps it took after that but he kind of liked the squelchy sound his boots made on the sodden riverbank. He grinned up at Cloud.

“Sorry to disappoint you, buddy, but bath time’s over. And I didn’t even use soap!” He leapt onto firmer ground, sinking into his own insoles. It felt like there was mud between his toes. “Wouldn’t happen to have a towel handy, would you?”

Cloud did not make a sound. It was definitely one of those days.

Zack smiled and soldiered on. “S’alright. I think we’re almost out of the rain anyhow.” He straightened just a little, not trusting Cloud on his own feet yet with the speed they needed. Zack scrubbed his wet hair off his forehead and took a look around. Unless his mind was playing tricks on him, the woods did not seem to have changed much. He brightened considerably.

“I know where we could get a towel!” he said, marching forward. “If we take a right on this trail, we’ll end up in Gongaga! Remember everything I told you?” Zack grinned and almost bounced under Cloud’s weight, not the least bit bothered that the boy did not answer.

“You’re going to love it there, Cloud! It’s bright and warm and my mother makes the best mango chow you’ve ever had. Hey, wait a sec, you’re a mountain boy. Have you ever actually had mango chow? Oh, you’re gonna love it! See, what you do is take a half-ripe mango and cut into slivers and…” Zack could almost see the sunshine in the distance through the grey haze of rain. “You toss it all up with lots of salt and some Gongagan Monster pepper and knock yourself out. It’s all sour and salty and hot at the same time.” Zack leapt forward, almost salivating.

The sunshine spread over him, the heat a reminder of better days, when the sun had been burning but Zack had not been soaked and clammy. “So how ‘bout it, Spike?” There was no answer. “Come on, Cloud," Zack teased, "aren’t you ready to meet your in-laws?”

Cloud turned his head and whimpered. Zack stopped. “Okay, okay, it would be a bit of a shock for my mother if I showed up with a guy draped all over me like this.”

Cloud made no other sound. Zack looked down the gravel trail. He could go to Gongaga. It would take a couple days hard running but it had been way too long since he’d seen his folks. A little way out, the black skies opened up, promising endless blue. Zack could almost smell Gongaga on the air, taste it even.

He swallowed. He couldn’t stop there, not now with Cloud sick and the military hot on their heels. Zack sighed. “Okay, Cloud, you win.” He shored Cloud up and turned to the left, grinning into the downpour that had overtaken them. “Straight on to Midgar.”

Date: 2007-02-22 01:32 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] wheatear.livejournal.com
Oh, Zack. How does he stay so cheerful? This is lovely, it really is, the way he keeps on talking to Cloud, trying to keep their spirits up... almost makes your heart break knowing what's coming.

Love it.

Date: 2007-02-26 02:14 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ardwynna-m.livejournal.com
ext_9747: Zack Fair as a puppy, holding a frisbee in his mouth. (Default)
I wish I knew Zack's secret, I really do. The poor dear deserved so much better than what he got.

Date: 2007-02-23 05:35 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] masamunes-song.livejournal.com
Man oh man. I can see what Aeris saw in Zack.

There IS something awfully sexy about a guy who would risk his neck for a comatose sack that used to be his friend.

I prefer it as a non-yaoi reading. There are other kinds of love that need to be celebrated, too.

Date: 2007-02-26 02:09 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ardwynna-m.livejournal.com
ext_9747: Zack Fair as a puppy, holding a frisbee in his mouth. (Default)
I prefer the non-yaoi reading too, with the 'in-laws' crack being nothing but teasing, but I can't deny that it could be taken as subtext.

Date: 2007-05-08 04:14 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] erissaval.livejournal.com
This is to inform you that one of our members has nominated your FF VII fic "The Crossing" for the Genesis Awards "Best Short Fic" and "Best Miscellaneous Genre" category.

The Genesis Awards (http://genesisawards.proboards100.com/index.cgi) is an annual award set up to recognise high-quality fanfiction in the FF VII fandom. As an individual, you can help us by nominating fics that you think deserve it by becoming a judge. The forum is also a place to discuss fanfiction, writing and Final Fantasy games in general. We would love to see you there!

Date: 2007-05-18 12:56 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com
This is a beautiful story! Congratulations on the nomination. You deserve it so much. **cuddles Zack.** You portray his undying cheerfulness so well! He is just adorable. X3 And it's so sad, how he's longing to go back to Gongoga, but knows he can't because of Cloud's illness and the fact that he can't end up bringing the military out there.

LOL, I love this: Cloud turned his head and whimpered. Zack stopped. “Okay, okay, it would be a bit of a shock for my mother if I showed up with a guy draped all over me like this.”

Date: 2007-05-19 05:50 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ardwynna-m.livejournal.com
ext_9747: Zack Fair as a puppy, holding a frisbee in his mouth. (Default)
Thank you so much! It's such a nice surprise that it went over so well.

Date: 2007-06-04 12:13 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] je-suis-kristi.livejournal.com
This was a beautiful story. I loved it!

Date: 2007-06-04 12:44 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] ardwynna-m.livejournal.com
ext_9747: Zack Fair as a puppy, holding a frisbee in his mouth. (Default)
Thank you very much!

Date: 2007-08-21 05:17 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com
Great story! I love Zack's constant chatter, trying to keep them both going. He's so cheerful, even in the face of such hardship.

Congratulations on the nomination, by the way! I actually found this story from the Genesis Awards site. Good luck on winning; I think you definitely deserve it.^^

Date: 2007-08-26 11:30 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] ardwynna-m.livejournal.com
ext_9747: Zack Fair as a puppy, holding a frisbee in his mouth. (Default)
It was a surprise to be nominated, especially since I hadn't heard of the Genesis Awards before that (which reminds me, better up and nominate a few of the more deserving fics out there before time's up). Glad you enjoyed it. Zack was such a happy guy, even with the undercurrent of sadness.

Date: 2007-08-29 02:47 am (UTC)From: (Anonymous)
I love how you portray Zack in this story. Good job! ^_^

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